Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday 4 May 2020
Sounds
the splashes of the tap,
the hose makes a big SPLAT!
The crunches of the leaves,
a purr of a cat.
What a day is that?!
😁🤣❤💖🎶😜🧜♀️🧜♀️🧜♀️💎💎:)✨🌀𝄞𝄞𝄞𝄞𝄞🎵🎵🎵🎵♪♪♪♪🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿💠
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Hi Sophie
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic poem, I feel like I can hear exactly what everything sounds like! Good work Sophie.
Sarah
thanks :)
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