Thursday 14 May 2020
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Hi Sophie
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing the story for writing. I liked the bit about how he choked on his breakfast and became a ghost! I'm glad the scientist was able to make a potion to change the ghost back into a toadstool. Do you think you would like to be invisible?
Sarah
I love it so much because wow i love animals.💕🐰🐥🐰🐰🐰🐣🐣🐣🐇🐇🐶🐶😀😀
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