WALT: Use punctuation correctly and write in first person.
In Niue I went to my favorite pool witch is Limu pools! Once I got to Limu pools I jumped in straight away once we got there. It was very calm once I got in and very beautiful because the sun was gleaming on the water. The sea was nice and cold and that is what I needed on a hot summers day.
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