Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday 10 September 2020
My Story
Once there was a lovely girl called Sophie and she had long smooth gold hair and her eyes are as green as grass. But one night her parents were going out and the babysitter was canceled and her parents had to go to the pizza store because they already got a ticket to go there. Sophie was sooooooooooooooo excited she wanted to do this her whole entire life. Her parents left her alone. I tell you!!! ALONE!!!! Sophie sat down and watched her favorite movie Pippi Longstocking and that movie was in German. While she was watching the movie she had red sweets and McDonald with tomato sauce.
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I think the number is nine , I like the fires that you made . I love your sentence because you had lots of adjectives from Makua.
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