Thursday 10 September 2020

My Story

Once there was a lovely girl called Sophie and she had long smooth gold hair and her eyes are as green as grass. But one night her parents were going out and the babysitter was canceled and her parents had to go to the pizza store because they already got a ticket to go there. Sophie was sooooooooooooooo excited she wanted to do this her whole entire life. Her parents left her alone. I tell you!!! ALONE!!!! Sophie sat down and watched her favorite movie Pippi Longstocking and that movie was in German. While she was watching the  movie she had red sweets and McDonald with tomato sauce. 
But Sophie heard the hallway creaking and she looked in the hallway and there was a mouse! Sophie felt a breath of relief. She looked at the mouse the second time, it turned into a pile of cards and the third time she looked at it the pile of cards turned back in the mouse!!! But then the mouse made a mouth with  sharp razor teeth!!!! Sophie got her pet ant out of its cage and threw it at the mouse. The mouse ate the ant. Next, Sophie threw a ball at him and he ate it, she put her hands out and the mouse ran into her hand and let it go and the mouse ran out the door and never to be seen again.                                    
But poor old Sophie had seen the mess and she was shocked. Sophie had cleaned the house in one hour. She got into her pj’s and finished watching Pippi Longstocking. But then she heard her mum and dad talking and her mum and dad opened the door at the last minute. Sophie said to mum and dad that she does not want to be left home alone again.


1 comment:

  1. I think the number is nine , I like the fires that you made . I love your sentence because you had lots of adjectives from Makua.

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